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Cherry Blossom Treeby *knight-of-sand

Traditional Art / Paintings / Illustration / Conceptual

There was the little demon, so now it's time for the little angel

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Oh, it's my big dream to visit Japan to see these really cherry blossom trees. I think they're the most wonderful trees at the world.

Made with:

Leningrad watercolour,

White gouache,

coloured pencils,

normal sketching paper,

Critique by ~PrunellaG Jan 27, 2013, 2:28:22 AM

Lovely colour on the tree and the accents on the sky. However, the ground seems somewhat flat, with little depth. This may be because most of the hatching detail of the grass was in the back of the area rather than the foreground. I normally detail the foreground and then fade towards the back. I'd also add most of the grass colour in the foreground and wash out towards the background.

The composition feels odd. I think if there had been more modelling of clouds to the right of the image it would balance, but the sky becomes very indistinct here.

I thought the angel gets a little lost beneath the tree, with one wing almost disappearing. Also the pose os unclear. Is she hugging her knees or does she just have an enormous cleavage? A problem is that with so much of the line work being quite delicate, the angel seems crudely outlined. A lighter hand may have made this work.

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Critique by ~Darkangellizgleez Jan 27, 2013, 1:32:13 AM

it is really beautifull, the lines are playfull set....
and it makes it original....it as a strong twist to it with the lines and is very special.
The angel sitting bij the tree is beauifull to and you have details....

i think you can be happy with you're artwork
cause it really stand out....
i can see that people would buy it and hang it as painting.
i think it is breathtaking, wonderfull,outstanding,diffrent.

I bless you and i watch your work closely soo...
who knows....when i critique again?

Next time i hope you draw something with people cause if you have diffrent techniques,visions and originality
you will be more noticed....